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"Burly Detective" Syndrome
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A variety of Purple Prose in which the writer goes out of their way to avoid character names and pronouns, using descriptions instead: "the wizard said," or "the red-head said." Writers use (and often overuse) these descriptions in an attempt to eliminate redundant words and make the dialogue more interesting. More experienced writers realize that names and pronouns are mostly invisible, and can be used without jarring the reader out of the story — descriptions are the opposite, forcing the reader to pause for a second and remember who the description might be describing. Of course, Tropes Are Tools. There are times when descriptions are helpful or even necessary, such as when the thing being described is immediately relevant to the scene. It is the overuse that is the problem. While this is most common in fan fiction, it does show up in published original fiction, not least due to the rise of self-publishing. The trope name comes from the Turkey City Lexicon, which named it in reference to the Mike Shayne detective novel series — whose various writers preferred to call the protagonist "the burly detective" or similar epithets rather than writing out Mike Shayne's name.note This may have made it easier for a writer who couldn't sell the story as a Michael Shayne one to change the name and sell it as another detective novel. In the UK (especially amongst the press), you might see it referred to as "Popular Orange Vegetable" syndrome, after a Guardian article brought attention to a particularly hilarious version in an article about carrots, which tried to avoid saying the word "carrot" entirely after using it once in the first line. Such descriptions are also referred to as "knobbly monsters", supposedly named after a story about crocodiles. See also Said Bookism (which can occur at the same time), Delusions of Eloquence, and Author Vocabulary Calendar; often accompanies (or is accompanied by) Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness. Compare and contrast Superhero Sobriquets, Everyone Calls Him "Barkeep", and the Red Baron, which are In-Universe descriptive names given to a character who (usually) merits them. Compare Nameless Narrative, in which epithets are used because all characters have No Name Given. See You Know the One for when this is used to conceal a character's identity. |
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In the Two Idiots series, Keith is usually referred to as "The Bluenette", while Daddy Dearest is sometimes called "The Ex-Rockstar". | |
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Parodied in Problem Sleuth, where nearly all relevant humans are identified like that as part of the comic's Film Noir setting. The boys get names like "Pickle Inspector" and "Churlish Toff", girls are referred to as "Nervous Broad" and "Hysterical Dame", even the main villain is just known as "Mobster Kingpin" in the narration. The only main character exempt from this is Madame Murel. | |
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Starship's Mage: The author does this a lot, combined with lots of viewpoint characters and even more side characters, which can make dialogue confusing. | |
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Happens often in A Practical Guide to Evil, i.e. when Amadeus is called "the green-eyed man" or Masego "Warlock's son". At one point, when describing Catherine, it gets ridiculous when she (after numerous other epithets and appellations are used) is called "the woman who once was a girl" - way to identify someone. | |
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Calvin and Hobbes: When fantasizing himself to be private eye Tracer Bullet, Calvin refers to people he encounters by concise descriptions, such as "the brunette" for his mom. | |
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SCP Foundation: the forest we don't know did anything hence we can't name is an extradimensional forest where dangerous and mind-screwy things happen if you ever refer to the mysterious woods or any individual inhabitants by name. It's all too easy for visitors in to break this rule by accident while visiting the Scottish forest: for the purposes of the curse, any descriptor used more than once also counts as a name. So containment for the Onomatopia Oaks requires everyone (and even the SCP documentation) to give that dangerous place a different epithet every time they refer to it. | |
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Sufficiently common in old Xena: Warrior Princess fanfic that it strongly shaped the way the fandom as a whole viewed the characters. The two characters are almost always referred to as "the warrior" and "the bard", leading to a lot of fanfic focusing much more heavily on Gabrielle's "bard" identity than the show itself did, just because people were so used to hearing her described that way. | |
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The Turkey City Lexicon is the Trope Namer. Their complete description of the phenomenon: | |
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The Expanse: "the big man smiled amiably" at least once per chapter Amos appeared in | |
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Warren Hutch, author of fanfics like Earth and Sky and The Turning of the Screwball, was an unashamed user of Lavender Unicorn Syndrome, and even defended the practice when critics tried to call him out on it. For example, in the first scene from Out of the Nest, he refers to Fluttershy as "the young pegasus" and Celestia as "the white giantess" and "the towering white mare". | |
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A lot of Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles fanfic slips into referring to characters as "the purple-banded turtle", which is a bit of a mouthful when overused. | |
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Parodied by How to Write Badly Well in "Refuse to Give Names to Characters." | |
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Star Island keeps padding out scene-opening paragraphs by referring to "the former Cheryl Bunterman," even though most of the characters know her only by her Stage Name of Cherry Pye. Towards the end of the novel, it starts calling her "the former Cheryl Gail Bunterman." | |
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Deserving: This Harry Potter fic has a scene in which "the Gryffindor" is used in a scene where both present characters are Gryffindors. | |
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The Jenkinsverse: Since the 'verse is a collaboration between a number of authors, this varies from story to story. The main "Deathworlders" story is pretty bad about it, but even the best side stories can get into it. | |
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The Blonde Cried Murder: This is an installment of the "Mike Shayne" series, which as noted above in the trope description, named this trope. In this installment, Michael Shayne is never referred to as a burly detective, maybe because this one was actually written by creator Brett Halliday instead of the hacks he handed the series off to in the late 1950s. But there are a lot of references to Shayne's red hair, like when a cabbie suggests that Shayne's a Fiery Redhead, or when Shayne's secretary Lucy thinks of him as "her red-headed employer", or Bert thinks of the man he just met as "the red-headed private detective" and then "that damned redhead" on the very next page, or the narration just calls him "the redhead" as he approaches a bar to talk to the bartender. | |
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Very common in the My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic fandom, to the point of coining the nickname, "Lavender Unicorn Syndrome", as well as inspiring a few parodies: Parodied and exaggerated in the short fic "Don't Wear It Out." Pinkie Pie accidentally breaks her name by overusing it, so no-one's able to call her by name anymore — not even the narrator. So the narration instead refers to her with epithets, each broader the last: "the pink mare", "the pink pony", "the pink equine", "the pink ungulate", "the pink mammal", "the pink quadruped", and finally "the pink carbon-based lifeform". Warren Hutch, author of fanfics like Earth and Sky and The Turning of the Screwball, was an unashamed user of Lavender Unicorn Syndrome, and even defended the practice when critics tried to call him out on it. For example, in the first scene from Out of the Nest, he refers to Fluttershy as "the young pegasus" and Celestia as "the white giantess" and "the towering white mare". Parodied by the fanfic Lavender Unicorn Syndrome. In this case, the syndrome is a literal disease that transforms characters into a duplicate of Twilight Sparkle. As a bit of Self-Referential Humor, the narrator consistently calls Rarity by name in the first chapter, but switches to calling her "the lavender unicorn" after she transforms. |
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The Twitter feeds Second Mentions and Knobbly Monsters collect examples of the UK media falling into this. | |
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The Dark Tower: Roland Deschain is often referred to as simply "the gunslinger" (in the first book his true name isn't even used until several chapters in). Justified, as in his world "gunslinger" is an honored rank, and he is also the last. | |
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Silverwing doesn't use this for most characters, but the narration can't seem to stop referring to Zephyr as "the albino bat" rather than just using his name. | |
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Monthly Girls' Nozaki-kun: Invoked and Played for Laughs. Chiyo wouldn't stop talking about her crush Nozaki to her friends, so her friend told her to stop saying Nozaki. Then she proceeded to continue talking about him, only replacing his name with things like "the ex-member of the basketball club", "the student in seat 14 in class A", or "the person who bought set B lunch at the canteen". | |
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Parodied by the fanfic Lavender Unicorn Syndrome. In this case, the syndrome is a literal disease that transforms characters into a duplicate of Twilight Sparkle. As a bit of Self-Referential Humor, the narrator consistently calls Rarity by name in the first chapter, but switches to calling her "the lavender unicorn" after she transforms. | |
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Artemis Fowl: Artemis is often referred to as the "Irish youth". | |
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Around the World in Eighty Days: Aouda is a young Indian beauty, who is rescued from a suttee by Mr Fogg and his companions. She travels with them because she's in danger of being forced into the ceremony again. The narrator later refers to her as "the young woman" a lot. | |
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